John Hansen PAL
Aug 29, 2023

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I like the way you delivered a warning message in this story. The actions of these people seemed fishy (whaley) to me. Fortunately, nothing untoward happened, but it could have.

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John Hansen PAL
John Hansen PAL

Written by John Hansen PAL

Freelancer, short fiction writer, and award-winning poet who loves experimenting with different styles and genres. Writing is in my soul and it won't leave!

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