Jay, you really have a way of catching the reader's interest so they can't wait to read the next…

“I’ll walk, thank you.” I lean forward and push onto my feet, but then I find myself floating two or three feet above the chair. Probably as an outward expression of my consternation, I find myself spinning in slow, willy-nilly, spiraling circles above the doctor’s desk. I look briefly down on him. He is turning the pages of his notebook. Evidently, not aware I am hovering over him, he is scratching an armpit, reading, nodding.
Where’s Johnny? Who is Johnny? Chapter Two
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Jay Squires
John Hansen PAL
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Feb 7, 2025
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Jay, you really have a way of catching the reader's interest so they can't wait to read the next chapter.
An invaluable skill.
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Written by John Hansen PAL
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Freelancer, short fiction writer, and award-winning poet who loves experimenting with different styles and genres. Writing is in my soul and it won't leave!
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