John Hansen PAL
Oct 23, 2022

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Love this story, Raine. I have attended a few "Bannings" snag sizzles in my time... but never dressed up for Oktoberfest.

I didn't catch on that Dan and his mates were undercover cops until you revealed that at the end. Only Aussies would get the Fatso link to being tall and skinny. (or a red head named Blue.) What a fun read.

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John Hansen PAL
John Hansen PAL

Written by John Hansen PAL

Freelancer, short fiction writer, and award-winning poet who loves experimenting with different styles and genres. Writing is in my soul and it won't leave!

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