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Oh Ahlam, this is brilliant, both the poem and your commentary. It is so sad that many of us lose the childhood wonder and questioning, because life happens and the opinions of others start to mean more than our imagination.

In your poem I could read a child’s imagination expressed through the words of an adult. When I grow up I want to be able to write like you 😉

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John Hansen PAL
John Hansen PAL

Written by John Hansen PAL

Freelancer, short fiction writer, and award-winning poet who loves experimenting with different styles and genres. Writing is in my soul and it won't leave!

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