John Hansen PAL
Aug 22, 2023

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Sudip, I like the concept of forest bathing. Thank you for sharing it in this poem.

Here are a couple of suggestions to make your poetry easier to read. I would remove the ... breaks between each stanza, as readers have to scroll too much to read a long poem. Also if you use (shift+enter) instead of just shift it makes a single space between each line rather than double (this is preferred and recommended for poetry on Medium.) The poem is quite good, though some of the rhyme seems a little forced. I did enjoy the read though.

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John Hansen PAL
John Hansen PAL

Written by John Hansen PAL

Freelancer, short fiction writer, and award-winning poet who loves experimenting with different styles and genres. Writing is in my soul and it won't leave!

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