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Thank you for sharing this, Nikita. It was a captivating read. Perhaps, it should be called “Shackles” though as you mention them throughout. One tip would be to seperate the text into paragraphs, which makes it much easier for people to read, especially on Medium where short paragraphs are recommended. Keep writing.

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John Hansen PAL
John Hansen PAL

Written by John Hansen PAL

Freelancer, short fiction writer, and award-winning poet who loves experimenting with different styles and genres. Writing is in my soul and it won't leave!

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