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The Big Sweep

Good morning, Sunshine

John Hansen PAL
2 min readApr 18, 2024

Random word drabble 109: “sweep”

Created by Author using Bing Copilot/Designer

I was trying to sleep. Charlie decided to sweep the floor. At least he wasn’t vacuuming, but I pulled the pillow over my head trying to ignore him.

That’s when Lucky jumped on me. I’m sure they had hatched a plan to force me out of bed, and if Charlie wanted something he always had a way of getting it.

Standing up, I shuffled to the kitchen to make coffee.

“Good morning, Sunshine,” said Charlie, leaning on the broom handle.

“Why are you so chirpy?” I inquired.

“I just heard the news; our friendly celebrity chef was sentenced to life.”

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What is a Drabble?

Most flash fiction is identified as stories under 1000 words. Many short-form publications require you to stay under 150 words. A drabble is a short fiction story of exactly 100 words.

I find drabbles to be an excellent exercise in keeping your writing tight because it forces you to discard any unnecessary words.

Drabbles are normally a stand-alone story with a beginning, middle and end, all contained within 100 words. However…

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John Hansen PAL
John Hansen PAL

Written by John Hansen PAL

Freelancer, short fiction writer, and award-winning poet who loves experimenting with different styles and genres. Writing is in my soul and it won't leave!

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