Very creative, Stephen, but a surprise and sad ending. Nice drabble.

I storm out to confront him, but the platform is empty. The cigar scent lingers, but the train’s whistle is silent, and the blinking lights are but a forlorn memory — like every Saturday since he passed away.
Another Saturday Morning Coming Down
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Stephen Dalton
John Hansen PAL
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Feb 15, 2025
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Very creative, Stephen, but a surprise and sad ending. Nice drabble.
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Freelancer, short fiction writer, and award-winning poet who loves experimenting with different styles and genres. Writing is in my soul and it won't leave!
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