John Hansen PAL
Sep 11, 2024

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What a wonderful job you did with these poems, Andrea. I enjoyed them all but think I liked the second the most "Caged Spirit: Good God, Release Me," and the highlighted couplet.

I liked seeing your handwritten text, and that is a good example to give your young son.

I look forward to your next piece with the couplets miixed up. That is quite an interesting experiment.

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John Hansen PAL
John Hansen PAL

Written by John Hansen PAL

Freelancer, short fiction writer, and award-winning poet who loves experimenting with different styles and genres. Writing is in my soul and it won't leave!

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