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What Goes Around, Comes Around

The story takes a turn

John Hansen PAL
2 min readJul 28, 2024

Random word 157: “turn”: Twister — Start the story with “Her shoes were too tight …”

An attractive woman wearing a black dress, high heels and gloves leaving an apartment
Created by Author using Gencraft AI

Her shoes were too tight … but so be it.

She left him in the bathroom. No words of goodbye were exchanged as she adjusted her gloves, turned the door lock, and quietly exited the apartment.

His lifeless eyes seemed to stare pleadingly out the wide bathroom window, as his body continued to spasm. The now-dead hair dryer still dangled from its cord in the spa bath.

No longer posing as a witness protection security guard, Graham took two short phone calls. The second was from Charles McDowell……. He answered, “It’s done! All went to plan,” and hung up.

2024 © John Hansen: All rights reserved.
Australian writer

Most of my previous drabbles have been published at Fiction Shorts but as I have fallen so far behind, I am publishing most now under my own profile. I am still using the daily random words kindly provided by Nancy Oglesby. I may or may not utilize the twist or genre depending on if it fits the story.

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John Hansen PAL
John Hansen PAL

Written by John Hansen PAL

Freelancer, short fiction writer, and award-winning poet who loves experimenting with different styles and genres. Writing is in my soul and it won't leave!

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